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About Me Member Antagonist conigliobianco18/Unknown Recent Activity Deviant for 6 Years
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that's it, i surrender

Thu Apr 7, 2005, 11:52 AM
ok, fuck it. i don't care, not any more. look, my hands are up. they don't go any higher. what else do you want me to do? yea i'll look you in the eye. i already am. baby you're dead on, and all i have to do is fire. wipe your face off. stand straight. don't let them see your backbone curve. that's not what this is about. go ahead, talk shit. i'm standing right in front of you. you play hard, but i'll play you harder. can't you keep up?

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  • Current Residence: nj
  • Interests: photography, music, books
  • Favourite movie: eternal sunshine of the spotless mind
  • Personal Quote: everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it

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:iconramshackle2:
hi, thanks for dev watch! :headbang:
:iconthetangyzip:
Hey man. You're not only the first, but also the ONLY person who has read my new poem, Love Stew. I truly appreciate your comment, because I have a feeling most of the people that comment me never really tell me what they really think. I know it's a little cheesy, but I was going for that " Hallmark card" kind of feel for it. Anyway, thanks again!

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:iconlovely-death:
Thank you so much! :hug:

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Death makes angels of us all
& gives us wings
where we had shoulders
smooth as raven's
claws
-Jim Morrison
:iconmelek:
(its funny how naive romanticism is met with cynicism and passive aggression)

Thank you for reading the chapter ^^ I thought nobody would actually read it.
The rest is not nearly so good, as that chapter is from experience and other chapters are well, just fantasy. But i hope they will be as good some day :)

:heart: thank you

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:iconhearshot:
Its funny how that guy hits on you.

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This needle is a gun.
:iconrubenz:
i read your last deviation,
it's nice ..

hope you're doing fine miss,
ruben

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:iconrubenz:
hi jess,
thanks for putting one of my pictures in your +fav-list.
shure means allot ..
he, we share the same age *jump, jump*

your devious information is so funny and your beautiful eyes make me happy ..
i'm not that 'into' poems (most cus i suck so hard at it..) but it's looks fine ..

keep it up

ruben
:iconthetangyzip:
No, problem. I consider myself one of the few surviving deviants to leave actual "comments". I never get more than " cool poem" and "i like this" anymore, it just seems pointless to even be here anymore. I'm glad you were able to take my comments as constructive criticism. I can't wait to see what else you will write, so I am adding you to my friends list. I always love to meet a fellow poet. Later.

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:iconthetangyzip:
You have some very impressive poetry in your gallery. You're use of imagery and mataphor is superior to a majority of the deviants whose work I've read. You should really check out ~fishwife and ~lostamongroses (my g/f :heart:), I think you will really like their work. Thanks for submitting your poetry here, it was a pleasure to come across your page.

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:iconclose2me:
hey jess k.i live in your hood.p-town.holla....

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